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| Hey Kate I need to write an 'about' page for my website ... are you up for helping ? Please !
Luv Justine x |
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I'll give it a crack ! Believe me this kind of writing is very hard that's why there are professionals who do it !
Send up the key points. Give me all that energy, that motivation, that passion of Pipimoomoo. Use short sentences ... keep your heart up front ... you've got to keep the reader interested and that's technique ... you have plenty of 'story' ... you guy's are so interesting ... you are a story ! You are a creative family and Pipimoomoo has blossomed in your environment ... you've had advice from New York taxi drivers to the buyers in Harrods .. . that Pipimoomoo children's clothing is inspired by children for children, made from 100% natural home-grown merino ... do you get my drift. Dump it all down so I get the full essence of Pipimoomoo. cheers KTB xxx |
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O.K .. here we go ... Draft one in attachment.
It's difficult all right ... how do you write that Pipimoomoo came to life from memories of my own gorgeous childhood without sounding all lovely dovely, plus I can hardly write that I wanted to create toys that weren't made from crappy plastic. Let me know your thoughts when your finished reading the draft. J x p.s. you should hear the birds in my garden ... what a place to work ! |
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Hello runaway train - shall I write a book ?? ... actually it's all good ! thanks.
It'll take me a while to sift and play ... but will come up with something. Thinking alone these lines as an introduction .... Pipimoomoo is a rag doll that became so much more. With her wild hair and funky design, the original doll set the scene for something unique ... Justine Summers is the creative force behind Pipimoomoo, her inspiration .... This will be fun ... but please tell me we have got lots of time to work on this ... ! Love Kate x p.s. Completely blissing out and loving my little boy .... I are now living in the world of the 'digger' - his last word before falling asleep. |
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OK J ... here is the first draft (actually it's about the 10th). Have a read and get back to me.
Off to the park now. Be home in an hour. Love Kate xx |
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| We are getting there ... just a few things ... 'Pipimoomoo has grown up in a magical garden on Best Island ....' can we add in something along the lines of ... That my true inspiration and drive are my children .... that I so want to be able to give them a life rich in adventure and show them dreams do come true. Also the paragraph about .... how we support an ethical manufacturing code, can we add in a moral respect for the environment' ..... was it Crosby, Still, Nash & Young that wrote ... ' teach your children well ' ... great line ! And sorry one more thing ..... I know you said to keep it 'short and sweet' but Kate there are SO many people I want to thank ... Fin for being amazing !, Mum and Dad for being the most fantastic parents you could ask for, BBB for being my ROCK and then there is all my Nelson team I work with who I couldn't do without ! Luv J xx p.s .. Been going through photos while designing the site ... here are some of our South Island Holiday ... I can't believe you haven't seen our caravan yet ! |
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O.K my dear ... I'll phone tonight after the kids are in bed and thanks again Katie B your a star ! ... what would I do without all my glorious friends - J xx |